Please review my landing page

[gocrazy]

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As we have received lots of controvertial responses about the mixing hen parties and children parties, we have decided to separate them using simple landing pages.

Here is one: go-crazy.co.uk/spy-birhday-london.html

Please take a look does it look professional enough and would you buy from it? Texts are fixed by one native UK speakers.

[Obosh]

nice one...simple but catchy....